Today I will be telling you about my learing this term. This term we have been doing some discriptive writing.
Today we did sick sentences.We changed the boring sentences and we made them Exicting. Here is my
boring and exciting sentence.
The glass moved.
The glass Rippled and shaked intensely.
We also have been writing about a girl named Anna
Here is the picture
Here is the story I wrote about her.
Sorry my story is not that finished
WARNING
DO NOT READ THIS AT NIGHT
One day in the attic a girl named Anna came back from a funeral. She had dark blonde hair and she loved the color black she loved to watch black and white movies.
Until one day when she went to the attic and she found this old mirror when she touched it it felt like water she was having so much but what she did not know that when it is 3 am her reflection can come alive and watch her sleep.
One day in the afternoon she went to the attic and found out that her reflection was not there so she started to wonder but she tripped on a log and fell in the mirror soon she became a ghost but she could only leave at 3am.
Soon she saw her reflection walking around soon Anna started to freak out she tried to break the mirror but she could not it was almost 3am soon she had one hour of freedom when it was 4 am she started to fade into the mirror and then she was back
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To the mirror she had to figure out how to break the mirror so she could become free but she needed to wait until 3am to smash the mirror but soon she started to fall asleep but she forgot about her reflection when she woke up and knew something was wrong. Soon she saw her reflection.
And she saw her throw the window so she needed to figure out how to get out of the mirror it was almost 3am when it was 3 am she started to try and smash it but it would not break so she knew that something was wrong so she thought maybe she was cursed so she put her hand on the wall and she went throw it so she knew that she was cursed.
Soon at 4 am she heard her family yelling her name she really wanted to go to her parents but she couldn't she started to get a little worried she knew that messed up but soon her parents stop and went inside and they went inside the attic her parents saw her in the mirror they tried to get her out but they couldn't soon at 3am she stared fade out of the mirror and in the arm of her parents then Anna and her parent worked together and they finally smashed the mirror.
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