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Wednesday, 24 June 2020

My Show Not Tell Writing.

Kamusta you incredible readers, ❤❤❤

Yesterday me ad my class learned to show not tell.We had to find some week action word and turn them into strong action word we used thesaurus to get some nice strong action words.

HERE IS A EXAMPLE.

Al gave Miss D coffee
Al rewarded Miss D some Delicious scorching coffee.


Thank you for reading my blog please leave a comment and tell some of your example.❤❤



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  1. Mrs Cassidy10 July 2020 at 10:35

    Hello Ellenessa.
    Well done on extending your sentence to make it stronger to read.I hope the coffee Miss D got didn't have cats in in.
    Maybe next time you could read your work to make sure it makes sense before posting.
    Have a great week.

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