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Monday, 13 April 2020

lost and found description

Hello guys its me.

Today im going to tell about my lost and found descriptive writing. during the lock down  here is the writing I did.
Thank you for reading please leave a comment. 


2 comments:

  1. Good morning Ellenessa.
    I have read other stories about the dinosaur and the fox.I didn't read about how the dinosaur started to fall apart.Now I know,he got his string caught on a nail.What a brave dinosaur.
    Just remember to use a capital letter after a full stop.
    I look forward to more of your wonderful work.Keep it up.

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  2. Hi Ellenessa. It is lovely to see your smiling face in the mornings.
    I am imagining all the wet friends! I am looking forward to your next piece of writing. :)

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