HEY SUSHI FAM,
Today I am going to tell you my Ballet poem we made ballet poem we are making ballet poems because tomorrow our whole school is going to the ballet but I don't know which one. So my class made there poems about the ballet they are going too. I added some shine to mine I hope you like my presentation.
Here is my Work.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora Ellenessa,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem about ballet but when I read your blog it didnt make sense at the start.
But I like how you used ballet and then did words that describe it.
By: Lovely Akimano
Kia ora Ellenessa,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem about ballet but when I read your blog it didnt make sense at the start.
But I like how you used ballet and then did words that describe it.
By: Lovely Akimano
Hello Ellenessa.
ReplyDeleteIt was my first experience watching ballet.I kind of enjoyed it.May favourite part would of been when the bad witches came out and there was lots of smoke.
What about you,what part did you enjoy most?.
Hello Eddie.
I like that you have changed all the colours.They work well together.
I also like that you gave your art work a title.It's a bit like writing a story.Put the title first,which tells us about the story.
The title of your art also does that.
Have a wonderful Christmas and holiday.
I look forward to seeing more of your holiday learning.