My Writing for Term 3

Hello my readers,

Today I have  another post about my writing me and my class have been learning about Onomatopoeia.

It is when you put sounds in your writing to make sound more incredible. we had to write about this race and we had to be the boy\girl  here is the video

 we all have made some sentences as a practice here are my sentences.

The wind was rushing past my face , ‘whssss’.

I ran so fast that I could hear my feet thudding.

I could hear the coach yelling instructions.

I  could hear my coach blowing his whistle very loudly

I heard the starting gun shoot threw the air and back down

I  also made a story it is pretty short so it wont take that long to read it.

A 10 year old girl runs a 800m race

One day I went to a race and I could hear the crowd cheering for their children. Now that the race starts I was third place. I started to get faster and then past the other racers I started to gain all my energy. l

came so fast that dirt came off of me soon the other racers started to gain up on me instead we were right next each other so i tried to  gain all my energy  to past him and I did I had one more lap to go i was all puffed up could hear my 

coach saying’’RUN RUN Keep Going,,

I could hear my feet thudding i was almost there i was halfway thru until I am finished I could hear my parents cheering I was getting energized again and zoomed threw past the other runners i was started to gain all my energy I did not want to stop so kept running just a few more  miles until I was done soon. 

I was finally finished the race and i became first place I was so proud of myself.

 

 hope you liked my story please leave a comment bye ❤❤