Today I´m going to talk about my writing. I had to make the sentences more intresting. Here is the picture that we had to write about.
This is the task that I had to do.
Here are my intresting sentences. I only wrote three.
The dogs ate the biscuits.
The tiny dogs Fluffy and Cuddles gobbled the biscuits, stuffing the food in their drooling mouths.
they started to grow really fast.
They started to grow really fast,swelling, expanding, stretching,was large as an elephant and as tall as a tree.
Now they are big
Now they are humongous now they are as huge as a giant .
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Muy bien Ellenessa,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have made your sentences so much better, even giving the dogs names!
Three good sentences are great, to show how you can do the work. Did you know you have used similes? I'm sure you think they sound so much better?
Hola Diane.
Deleteyes I do know that I used similies I´m glad that you love y work that I have done.Thank you for commenting on my blog.
Hello Ellenessa.
ReplyDeleteYou have certainly increased the sick story.It's gone from drab to fab!.
I wonder who takes these dogs for their exercise.I suppose the one good thing about the dogs being this size is,you could just ride them.YEHAA!
I'm keen to take one for a spin around the block:)
Hello Mrs Cassidy.
DeleteI like the idea of riding on the dogs that sounds fun.
I think its will be hard to take them on a walk but they will still have to be normal sized Thank you for commenting.