Wednesday, 23 October 2019
Marshmallow writing
This term we have been writing about a video called Marshmallow Here is my Writing.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hey Ellenessa it'a Zainab your blogger buddy
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you described the monsters action really good with your own words.Maybe next time try and make your sentences more longer but everything else is good.
Bye from your blogger buddy Zainab
Good job. remember to use more of the vivid verbs and adjectives we discussed.
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