I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nessa, I really like the way you used your best friend or friends name Divine.I like that you told us that a cub found the piano not just a young bear.Maybe next time you could put fullstop. Who was the aouthor?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Nessa I Like that you told me the name of the book and that the cub found a piano. Are you going to add more into it?
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ReplyDeleteI like the fake texting. Maybe next time you could write a little bit more and a link to fake texting. How much days did this take you?
Hi Nessa, I really like the way you used your best friend or friends name Divine.I like that you told us that a cub found the piano not just a young bear.Maybe next time you could put fullstop. Who was the aouthor?
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