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Thursday, 27 September 2018

The Spy

Hello and thank you for visiting my blog. This is my writing about a Spy. I hope you like it please leave a comment if you liked it.

Spy


One day I saw someone looking at me. Then they ran away.  I looked behind the drawer .
They ran away and I got scared.
 I hid in my bed but there were two spys on my bed.  They ran away again but something touched me.
They picked me up, it was the spys. They took me away.  I tried to  get out but  I could not because I
was tied up. I  looked  frightened, the spy came forward  and looked at me again. I was so scared  then
we talked and we were friends.




          FINISH

1 comment:

  1. Good morning Ellenessa.
    The title of your story had me hooked. I started to read it but soon found it difficult as I needed to scroll across the page and the different colours made it hard for me. If you see me in the playground maybe you could catch up with me and tell me what your story was about. Do you like reading Spy stories? My favourite stories are about horses.

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