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We are learning about surface features surface features are little bits that fix your story like punctuation, spelling and repeated words. Make it easier for other people to read.
Here is my example of my sentence without surface features.thissentsaChulymakessen Zbuttisrellyhrd to reed
so that is why surface features are important
On our Room Nine site and make a copy of a writing document and it had someones amazing story without surface features so we fixed the story and now it makes sense. Here is the writing I changed
He kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder. He tried not to suffocate as laidunder the bed he was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house.
Mum has had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us. Maybe he was one of them looking for revenge. But why would he come? Mum w ould just move and how did he find us? We live on the other side of the planet from where all of mum's boyfriends were so how could he find us? He might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one of her devices ‘Hello, where are you?I know you're here, you're going to tell me where your mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies. So which will it be death or freedom you have ten seconds to choose wisely’.’'
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