This Term we have writing about the man on the moon we had to use show not tell here is my writing.
Thursday, 21 November 2019
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ReplyDeleteTo Ellenessa your did a fanatic job of writing a show not tell of the man on the moon . Where you the girl who waved to the man on the moon?
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