I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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Friday, 6 September 2019
My book review
for writing we have been doing a Book review about the Bear and the piano
Hello Ellenessa it's Zainab your blogger buddy. I like the way you put some adjectives in there.But maybe next time put a few more adjectives is everything else is good.I remembered when I wrote a book review it was fun and boring at the same time but I managed to get through it.Have you ever wrote more book reviews in your life? Bye Ellenessa
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hello Ellenessa it's Zainab your blogger buddy.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put some adjectives in there.But maybe next time put a few more adjectives is everything else is good.I remembered when I wrote a book review it was fun and boring at the same time but I managed to get through it.Have you ever wrote more book reviews in your life?
Bye Ellenessa