I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi it's Zainab from Wigram primary. I really like the way you were exaggerating on how far Mars is to earth.We learnt about space and how cold and hot the temperature is.Maybe next time try to put more longer sentences but that's it.Have you ever written about any other planet apart from Mars. Bye From Your Blogger buddy Zainab.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi it's Zainab from Wigram primary.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you were exaggerating on how far Mars is to earth.We learnt about space and how cold and hot the temperature is.Maybe next time try to put more longer sentences but that's it.Have you ever written about any other planet apart from Mars.
Bye From Your Blogger buddy Zainab.